I have another request for revision for Claire's first book and I'm really excited about the possibilities. The irony? I've been working on a series of short stories taking place before chapter 3 of this book. The revision request? More showing/less telling in the first few chapters.
My brain hurts. Where do I start? I've been writing so much detail about this time frame and now I can probably lift a story or two for inclusion in the book and I'll be set to go. But I have so many details to consider. Plus? My goal for the website is keep early stories and book separate. So I need to pull details from stories not published on the site yet. I can do this. I can.